Dolby

For question 1, don't just list the codes and conventions that you have used in comparison to another RMA; you need to consider why you have used the codes and conventions- how are you communicating to your audience with them? In what ways did you challenge any and why? Make it explicit that you know that codes and conventions are used and some are followed for a reason.
For question 2 there is a lack of detail. You mostly focus on audience a bit too much and need to consider WHAT social group you've presented- age/gender/identity and how different elements of the magazine represent them- colloquial language, aggressive stance and angry facial expressions, dark clothes symbolic etc.